OH ROARK TUSK’D SUBSTANTIAL
BEJEWELED ORE’D TAX’D CROWN
BEDAZZLED SIZED NEURON’D
ARCH’D BY “WORK” ENGIRTHED
ROGUE AGENTS; BATTLE CRY -
O’ THE DRAFTS O’ URIS O’ RAND
O’ THE STEEL’D TOO ET BRUNHOFF
SET LINES CONSTITUTED - GRAYS
AMBITIONS AS “WORK” EXODUS
A SLAVE - SELF DECLARED
IN INDEPENDENCE DRAMATIZED -
CROSS GRAINED - ROOTS
O’ MODERN THATCHING RISINGS
SKETCHED DUTY COURAGE
BEAUTY FOR BEAUTY;
NO HONOR - NO ALLEGIANCE
LIGHTLY THOUGHT - GIVEN
NOR BESTOWED - NOR SUNG;
HONESTY IN TRUTHS — AMERICA
A SLAVE - AGAIN - APART
IN INTELLECTUAL HONESTY;
STEEL’D - TUSK’D - FO’ GRAY’D
IN INDEPENDENT LIGHTNESS
MINDED - SPARKED - FIDELITY
COMMON ALLEGIANCE -
ROGUE TO WHAT BE
STATUS QUO - RATAXES-ETTE
BLIND MICE “WORK” KING
HORNED ESTABLISHMENT RHINO
OH ROARK - FIRED META
HOUSING PROJECTS RENAISSANCE
O’ AN ACHILLES; BOMBASTIC
METED HEADS - LES MISERABLES
O’ DIRTY COMPROMISES GRAYS
HOW RICH HIS LINES DRAWN
COMMON - SMARTLY - REFINED
BEDAZZLING - IN LIVING
ACCOUNTABILITY DRAFTS —
YET BAUHAUS WAYS KEATING
SO SET SELF-ASSURED
SECURE’D; A FREE; AN AMERICAN
SLAVE - TO HIS COURAGEOUS
INDEPENDENT ARCH’D “WORK”
HONEST INTELLECTUAL STRAIN
A BEJEWELED SET FOUNTAIN’D
ROGUE; HIS GRAY FORLORN’D
MATTER OF TUSK’D INTEGRITY
TRUMPETED PURITY BRAVERY
CLEAN AS BLACK & WHITE WRIT LARGE
CONTRASTED - FOCUSED - STEEL’D
NEURONS HIS ORE’D “WORK” SONG
FIDELITY/BRAVERY/INTEGRITY - BABAR’D
ASSURED - HE THE LIVING - NOVELLY TRUE.
J.P. HOGAN
[P&P FIRST - SECOND DRAFT AS POSTED DATED TIMED]
[SOME EDITS HERE TO HERALD IT A THIRD DRAFT, NOW]